For just a minute
let me pretend
you aren’t there
and that the sounds
I can hear
are the sounds
of trees
softly brushing
against the sky
of rain
softly sousing
the earth
and not your
beautiful hands
softly closing
the door
between us.
Wow. I don’t know how you did this but it’s fresh and unique and minimalist and still achieves an emotional reaction. A lot in ome short poem. 🙂
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Thank you! That’s very kind. You’ve made my day.
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You’re talented. 🙂
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*one
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